Dr.SigmundFap

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I've been saying this too. The apostles storyline is unrealistic because of how he wrote the scene. Personally I have no problems with how far Sophia goes in a scene or with a character as long as it is kept logical or believable. Example how Deshawn gets to see what Sam is yet to see even after so many days. He rushed the apostles which is the Storyline's biggest downfall.

Dylan's storyline is paced well. It is the only male storyline that I actually enjoy playing. Aiden's storyline also but that is basically because I have a thing for task based dynamics.
Right now, Aiden's story is well-paced because it's tied in with Dylan's arc atm. However, once the reader gets the opportunity to stop Aiden or it no longer affects Dylan's going to boarding school, this pace may change for Aiden.

I know he didn't mention a time table but Aiden's task happen everyday. Even in the roadmap he gave when the time skip was applicable Aiden's tasks continued everyday from Monday to Friday. So that's where I base my assumption that the storyline is actually getting in the way for time jumps. Also it would look weird if Aiden's tasks were spread out once a week or even further. Since other Storylines will take jumps, in order to keep with them Aiden too would need the skips leading to scenarios where there are no tasks for two weeks, creating a logic hole of why Aiden is not asking Sophia to do anything. If the tasks are kept closeby then Sophia's corruption would become disproportionate to the whole story.
I think a time-lapse or skip will work comfortably with Aiden. It could work in her dropping her guard and believe that he may leave her alone only to have him approach her and have her do something unexpected, which puts her in the moment of choosing what she should do. Does she comply or rejects?

I highly doubt her corruption will become disproportionate as L&P did write the novel in a way that you're required to the necessary filthy points to advance the scene. Hence, his GTA reference, and we've also seen a shift in filthy points to character points for certain characters. I wonder if this means that L&P believes that some characters already have enough filthy points, and he wants to focus on characters points?
 
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I know he didn't mention a time table but Aiden's task happen everyday. Even in the roadmap he gave when the time skip was applicable Aiden's tasks continued everyday from Monday to Friday. So that's where I base my assumption that the storyline is actually getting in the way for time jumps. Also it would look weird if Aiden's tasks were spread out once a week or even further. Since other Storylines will take jumps, in order to keep with them Aiden too would need the skips leading to scenarios where there are no tasks for two weeks, creating a logic hole of why Aiden is not asking Sophia to do anything. If the tasks are kept closeby then Sophia's corruption would become disproportionate to the whole story.
I don't see a problem with timing breaks in Aiden's 12 tasks. Not even here in this forum with our concentrated perverted intelligence it was possible to invent 12 tasks that included a slow increase in the level of difficulty and were not totally stupid. So if Aiden is not a genius, that seems to be the case, and no logistical team behind him has organized everything he thinks up, then it should be possible to explain breaks between the individual tasks without any problems.
The "realism" that is often overworked here would lead to such breaks in my world and only make two tasks, and sometimes even only one task per week, possible, depending on the organizational effort.
On the other hand, if you just say go to this place and fuck this person then of course it's very easy.
 

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I know he didn't mention a time table but Aiden's task happen everyday. Even in the roadmap he gave when the time skip was applicable Aiden's tasks continued everyday from Monday to Friday. So that's where I base my assumption that the storyline is actually getting in the way for time jumps. Also it would look weird if Aiden's tasks were spread out once a week or even further. Since other Storylines will take jumps, in order to keep with them Aiden too would need the skips leading to scenarios where there are no tasks for two weeks, creating a logic hole of why Aiden is not asking Sophia to do anything. If the tasks are kept closeby then Sophia's corruption would become disproportionate to the whole story.
I don't know if Dr.Fapalot made this as an academic exercise or it was based on some intel:
It's true that so far Aiden's tasks occurred every day, but unless we have other information on that from L&P I don't see why they should happen everyday. Tuesdays, Wednesdays and Fridays are almost sure because they are teaching days for Sophia so it is likely that the tasks happen there. (even if I don't know how much daring (realistically! :D) they could be if they happen in the classroom, but this is not the matter at hand).

But then I don't see why they should happen everyday, weekends excluded. Sure according to the table there are not so many possibilities and degrees of freedom considering the number of remaining PDs. It also depends, e.g., where the 12th task will be placed in the story, if it will be the last stroke that contributes to the (bad) end of the FW route or it will have a smaller impact.
But, in general, I don't think that Aiden's tasks prevent time jumps, if anything I'd find it more realistic (again!) that as the stakes increase a little bit more of time occur between them (for the build up and the pace of the story).
 
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The apostles storyline screws everything up. I actually think the progress with Dylan makes a lot of sense, so I don't think I'd change a thing with it. One of the problem with the apostles story is that it screws the pacing up for everything else. Every other story arc has moved glacially and yet the kids are on the fast track. It's disorienting to the rest of the game that one story can be so far advanced while other, more established stories, are still stuck in Act 1.
I don't like the apostles story at all but the story arc (i.e., sexual advancement) doesn't have to be uniform for every LI. It would feel like robotic and cheap gameplay otherwise. You may have to also look at the advancement of MC for all LIs as a whole. Different pace for each LI makes the story more "realistic."
 
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Please keep it a bit civil. She made a funny point and your reply was BS. No need for an ad hominem attack!
Please don't misrepresent my sarcastic joke. Others make them all the time in every thread, there's no cause for you to try and target me specifically just because you failed to understand it. That's what is not civil. Do try to hold some semblance of good humor? I even went back to add a winking smiley face and thumbs up to that post so hopefully it will be better to understand for anyone that might be confused by it. Intent was not there as you want to claim and i will NOT retract it because i had zero intent. It's a joke, nuff said.
 
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I don't like the apostles story at all but the story arc (i.e., sexual advancement) doesn't have to be uniform for every LI. It would feel like robotic and cheap gameplay otherwise. You may have to also look at the advancement of MC for all LIs as a whole. Different pace for each LI makes the story more "realistic."
I'm honestly not even sure why that story was added. He had plenty of content to otherwise work with, it seems like it was nothing more than a means to extend the development time out even further than what should be considered reasonably necessary.
 

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Love when I witness someone backpaddling (not referring to anyone I was talking to).

Anyways I am curious to want the next debate in this thread will be regarding these, useless little bits of the background of story that will lead us to wonder the dimensions of an object or location to do an over-analysis of it.

My personal favorite is still the Sophia's Bag Arc.
 

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I'm honestly not even sure why that story was added. He had plenty of content to otherwise work with, it seems like it was nothing more than a means to extend the development time out even further than what should be considered reasonably necessary.
Money. I can only imagine how much money certain people are willing to pay for content like that coming from a talented creator. Wouldn't be surprised if L&P got a bunch of emails from people begging for this type of content. Not my cup of tea, thats for sure.
 

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Money. I can only imagine how much money certain people are willing to pay for content like that coming from a talented creator. Wouldn't be surprised if L&P got a bunch of emails from people begging for this type of content. Not my cup of tea, thats for sure.
Money and flavor.
 

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I actually based my statement on the roadmap L&P gave us, not this.


The way I see it is that when you have one of the hottest milfs following your commands a teenage boy will never stop at one task a week or one task in 2 weeks. That's unrealistic on a whole new level. Even if it were a guy who was subservient to Aiden he would use the guy as his slave regularly. He is bully by nature, there's no way he would let off Sophia and only toy around once in 2 weeks.

For Aiden this is no proper decorated scheme. This is fun for him so he doesn't need teams or well organized and thought out plans. Whatever comes to his head, whatever he finds amusing is the task.

Also Sophia goes to school on Wednesday's and Friday's I believe not Tuesday.

Also thinking 12 tasks shouldnt be a giant deal to begin with. There's internet for help even in their world. Also the only reason why we have trouble figuring out the tasks is we don't know the exact extent to which L&P wants to take this storyline. I have mentioned how I like the tasks dynamic so 12 tasks is no big deal for me too. Of course not everyone will agree with my views and the tasks but that is the case even with L&P's thought out and planned tasks. There's no way everyone will ever agree.

I say it will be disproportionate if the tasks are closeby. While the other Storylines are skipping time Aiden's will reach it's finishing point. Like Aiden reaches task 9 while other storylines have only moved 2 events each. The tasks would either have to be made less intense ( which ruins the storyline ) or be spread out like the other Storyline and why I believe that doesn't work is already mentioned at the start.
Well, because I stick to my opinion, I am so underexposed that I would not be able to organize 12 tasks on 12 days in a row even with the help of the Internet. Even with a weekend in between. Therefore, if I were Aiden, breaks would be necessary!
 

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I don't like the apostles story at all but the story arc (i.e., sexual advancement) doesn't have to be uniform for every LI. It would feel like robotic and cheap gameplay otherwise. You may have to also look at the advancement of MC for all LIs as a whole. Different pace for each LI makes the story more "realistic."
I think there's a slight misunderstanding of the definition of LIs. I do not consider the apostles LIs because they're too on the periphery. LIs would be Dylan, Aiden, Liam, Alyssa, Ellie, Patricia, etc. The old men, the apostles, Bennett, and others are not, in my opinion, the game's LIs. Sophia may have sex with people besides her LIs, but that doesn't change the fact that they're still periphery characters. So the Apostles advancing so quickly is jarring because it goes against the flow of the story, with characters we barely know, and have a questionable background. It would have been better to let the old men from the nursing home advance with Sophia since we know them better.

But you're right that progress does not need to be uniform between LIs, that would be boring. IMO Dylan will be the final LI to advance with Sophia.
 

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I think there's a slight misunderstanding of the definition of LIs. I do not consider the apostles LIs because they're too on the periphery. LIs would be Dylan, Aiden, Liam, Alyssa, Ellie, Patricia, etc. The old men, the apostles, Bennett, and others are not, in my opinion, the game's LIs. Sophia may have sex with people besides her LIs, but that doesn't change the fact that they're still periphery characters. So the Apostles advancing so quickly is jarring because it goes against the flow of the story, with characters we barely know, and have a questionable background. It would have been better to let the old men from the nursing home advance with Sophia since we know them better.

But you're right that progress does not need to be uniform between LIs, that would be boring. IMO Dylan will be the final LI to advance with Sophia.
I think everyone on this phone, plus Liam is a Love Interest of Sophia.

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The ones that are not on this phone and are cover under Lesbian, Filthy, and Good Wife are more driven by Lust than Love.
 
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I think there's a slight misunderstanding of the definition of LIs. I do not consider the apostles LIs because they're too on the periphery. LIs would be Dylan, Aiden, Liam, Alyssa, Ellie, Patricia, etc. The old men, the apostles, Bennett, and others are not, in my opinion, the game's LIs. Sophia may have sex with people besides her LIs, but that doesn't change the fact that they're still periphery characters. So the Apostles advancing so quickly is jarring because it goes against the flow of the story, with characters we barely know, and have a questionable background. It would have been better to let the old men from the nursing home advance with Sophia since we know them better.

But you're right that progress does not need to be uniform between LIs, that would be boring. IMO Dylan will be the final LI to advance with Sophia.
Yup, You are right. I meant anyone who have sexual activities with Sophia by LI. Thanks for your clarification. :)

I agree with you in most of parts. But there were some other NPCs recently introduced with different paces. For example, Larry had the fastest pace at that time but at least I liked the event.

I surely felt the apostle story was uncalled for and almost ruined the other stories. Maybe it's the pace or reader's flavor as the other mentioned. IDK.
 

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If you read the text between Sophia and Aiden, He just gives her 12 assignments but there was never a timetable of when the assignment was to happen. I believe he picks and chooses the time the assignments will happen, or how L&P wrote the story.
Exactly. There is nothing, in my limited thought on this, that prevents him from skipping days or weeks. Months maybe a bit challenging. He can do a simple Sophia summarizes her situation to capture any little additions he wants to explain the jump, add detail and he presses on. This would allow her to tell the audience where she is in whatever state of mind, corruption and it could make it more believable, realistic, or at least in line with the real world timeline. Dylan would be a Sophomore in College by now.
 
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