Not really a fan of everything being written in third-person. (Scott woke up and looked at his wife). I much prefer second-person for games like this (You wake up and look at your wife). It really makes the sex scenes seem weird too, since this other guy, who's name is also Scott, is fucking my wife...
eg:
Third-person perspective
Maggie started to lower herself, engulfing Scott's cock with her pussy, it was extremely rare for her to let him inside her unprotected, but he knew she was too horny to think straight.
vs Second-person perspective
Maggie started to lower herself, engulfing your cock with her pussy, it was extremely rare for her to let you inside her unprotected, but you knew she was too horny to think straight
and just for completeness, First-person,
Maggie started to lower herself, engulfing my cock with her pussy, it was extremely rare for her to let me inside her unprotected, but I knew she was too horny to think straight
Other than that, I'm liking it so far, and will probably be watching this even if it stays with a third-person perspective.